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hay canada we can do it we can expunge money our bounty can support our selves with plenty left over to give i can keep making pizza truckers keep trucking we still need people... to know where everything is going raising kids could be a job gangsters instead of doing it for money do it to keep it away from the kids politicians might start working for good anythings possible everyone says they want to be good say they are good there is more of us than their of them so why do we let them win so easy to... hell dude our shoes would cost the same

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Date: 9/1/2010 10:48:00 AM
We do like to believe there are more good people than there are bad ones. I think there are a lot of shades of gray into which we fall. But the day politicians start doing something good on people's behalf, I'll be shocked. This is a highly creative free verse form, John. Enjoyed it very much and it's nice to read your work again. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:07:00 AM
A nice patriotic thoughts, john
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Date: 9/1/2010 2:44:00 AM
interesting sentiment here, i agree with all you say, enjoyed this poem. Harry
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