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joy,my joy

Calm waters of spring
fishes leap over in joy -
my love let fly kisses by breeze

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  1. Date: 12/4/2013 4:01:00 PM
    came back here to respond to the question you asked me, if someone far gone can reinvent themselves. The poem was about my son, whom I visited over Thanksgiving. he is not "too far gone" yet. He has time to "reinvent himself" because he has many good traits if he would just quit the drinking . He does it only at night but that is not good during school nights. He should give it up until the weekends and be more attentive of the kids he is raising.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Loving this one again!! and hey, I am seeing congrats below here that you got for it. So congrats. which contest was it?

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Oh wonderful.....congratulations

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 6:26:00 PM
    A delightful poem. Congratulations on your win. SuZ

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 3:40:00 PM
    Jenish congratulations on your excellent win. I look forward in reading more of your poems. Welcome to PS. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 1:48:00 PM
    Hi Jenish i love the haiku,,, ;-) Congratulations!!! Thank you for entering one of my latest contest. please enjoy all the other winners who took their time in entering the same contest you did. you can find the list on the -Contest Winners: Member area- or you can visit my newest blog called ""from HEART to HEART ..."" stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 11:23:00 PM
    oh I forgot, I already must have seen all your stuff. I had just not seen that first one before!!! well, I wanted to say thanks for your kind comment to my most recent poem. And welcome to Soup, if I forgot to say that before!

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 11:53:00 AM
    your poetry, like this one, is so joyful.