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Jovial Evening

Wine for two, I drink alone.

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Phillip Sohn

Date: 2/21/2010 9:42:00 PM

Woah, this is simply genius. I'm beginning to understand the complexity behind several words. It's amazing. Congratulations!

John Freeman

Date: 2/19/2010 6:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your 2 win Raul. Sincere, Moses

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/17/2010 11:48:00 AM

yes! I hear this beauty! CONGRATS RAUL! jimbo

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/16/2010 11:48:00 PM

My congratulations to you Raul on placing 2nd on this contest. This is deserving. It is attracting participation, really a mind filling. (^_^) Noel.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations Raul, on your well deserved placement in the “SPACES” poetry contest sponsored by: Brian Strand with these imagination evoking words. I can see why you are in the winners circle! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2010 8:38:00 AM

OH my, THIS one is GOOD. Congrats, Raul!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/13/2010 4:30:00 AM

Raul, What great imagery in your lines....perfect Imagism poem. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Connie

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/12/2010 6:55:00 PM

Aww! what a shame, stood up.:) I enjoyed the smile...Margaret

Date: 2/11/2010 4:04:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Kind of bummer for the one planning for two. Clever poem. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Enjoy your big honor. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 2/11/2010 1:12:00 PM

Kool Imagism Raul, many congratulations on your success in Brian's fine contest >> James

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 2/11/2010 10:32:00 AM

Congrats on 2nd place. Based on what I have seen it must have been close. Mac

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/11/2010 10:26:00 AM

Oh this is a true winner. Congratulations. Truly dramatic. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2010 8:25:00 AM

Congrats Raul on your winning poem and placement in Brian's Spaces Contest.. knew it was a winner first time I read it.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/11/2010 7:52:00 AM

Oh yes.....I thought this was a winner when I first read!! Congratulations dear Raul...this one creates such sad Valentine images! So well done, and wishing you good company to join you in a glass of wine! :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/11/2010 4:52:00 AM

Raul, this is really good. I like it alot. congrats to you!

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 2/11/2010 3:44:00 AM

Awesome Raul, It says so much!!!! Congratulations on your win!! Jeralynn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/11/2010 3:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest Raul. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2010 2:31:00 AM

Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest, Raul. Very heartfelt and touching! Love, Carolyn

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/11/2010 1:55:00 AM

Sláinte , Raul and well done with your clever piece , Congrats ...

Brian Strand

Date: 2/11/2010 12:38:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'SPORT'S MAD ?' is now open.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/10/2010 5:34:00 AM

OH NO.. I am imagining the missing line.. good luck if for Brian's Spaces contest.. your title keeps the reader wondering.. an interesting spin on the evening scene u have set.. enjoyed .. and intrigued by what u had in mind for the middle... luv.. Linda-Marie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/9/2010 8:43:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Brian's contest with this one should you enter it Raul. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 2/9/2010 8:41:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Raul.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/9/2010 8:20:00 AM

Ouch....this is very painful, and heart wrenching. Well done!!! Good luck in the contest, Raul!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/9/2010 3:40:00 AM

Wine for two.Ow was it your date she let you down?Don't worry Raul,Wine for six next time,:)...Love this story..a good one indeed..Charma