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J.u.l.i.e. L.o.v.e.l.e.s.s.

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J.u.l.i.e. L.o.v.e.l.e.s.s.

Just that one girl,
Under the influence of romantics,
Living for love,
In deception of useless antics,
Every thing she could want,
Lying to a mask,
Often subject to a taunt,
Vulnerable to it's grasp,
Ever living in tomorrow,
Living for the waking dawn,
Enlightenment found in sorrow,
Sorrow never did her wrong,
Softly romantic yet viciously loving.

Copyright © Jay Smith

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  1. Date: 2/20/2010 7:11:00 PM
    good to know she likes it too :) ------Ell

  1. Date: 1/18/2010 5:51:00 AM
    Cool. I just now i guess "met" Julie but she does seem really cool I think I read some of her poems. i am now going to read more of them.

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  1. Date: 9/30/2009 8:07:00 AM
    I love the write James:)

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 1:51:00 PM
    Very nice tribute to a fellow Souper, James. Living "in tomorrow" is certainly better than living in the past. Smart girl. Great work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 1:13:00 PM
    The form is good. Keep writing. Sara