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Its Just My Current Situation, So Theres No Title.

Here I sit at home at night Drinking beer while nothing seems right. I listen to the same French song This has been going on much too long. With poetry I feel that I begin nearly To see some things a little more clearly My mind and the page are a powerful fusion Or perhaps they are no more than a common illusion I feel my path is no longer pure But as to why I'm not so sure. So I feel all that I do now is a sin. But still, I long for my life to begin… ___________________________________ btw, if you wana hear the french song i was talking about here it is. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrgcRvBJYBE. its really cool and mellow, and surprisingly from the 50's.

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Date: 7/9/2010 4:02:00 PM
Graham, thanks kindly for your comments on Six Sixty Six. It's for the contest of for numbers by Deborah Guzzi. I have no fears about writing about anything as I am a something that's everywhere. I so enjoy writing listening to music with a small drink, just koolio >> James
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:52:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
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Date: 7/1/2010 10:21:00 AM
Hi Graham, alcohol and music, a lethal combination for me, I do far too much thinking. Love that line - 'my mind and the page are a powerful fusion'. I be sure to look up that song. (Just one edit if you don't mind me saying - im / I'm) Enjoyed the read, thanks ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/30/2010 3:36:00 PM
actually theres no way that songs from the 50's, my friend must be sh*t'n me
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