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Its Just a Number....So Why Care?...Dont...

Like chalk on a sidewalk we stand out for a moment
Then we are washed away by the rain

Fake.

Love.

Hurt.

Pain.

Everything you try to be to fit in with that crowd you wanna be in
But then the truth comes out and everyone knows you're a fake

Lies.

Ages.

Sadness.

Scared.


The one you want and need to be with cause you love and feel different
But the age stops everyone when its just a number,But I wanna be you forever

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John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo Date: 11/16/2009 12:32:00 PM A solid job and true statement Login to Reply

Jay Loveless Date: 9/15/2009 10:49:00 AM Sweet Cheeekkkssss!!!!!! Ohmigawwwd!! I Loveee This Lexi Babee!!! All Of It. Jeeze If Only I Could.....Ohmigod...lmao...okay well i had coffie and its still pumping through my system so yeh but i seriously still friggin love this peice!!! miss you more xoxo ~Booboo Login to Reply

Jared Pickett Date: 9/8/2009 1:58:00 PM I like the rhythm this write. Wonderfully expressive, awesome structure.....:JP] Login to Reply

Farah Chamma Date: 8/27/2009 1:25:00 PM Great poem...I love it..the first two lines are fantastic... Always, Farah Login to Reply

Cameron Holden Date: 7/2/2009 1:51:00 PM very interesting subject good write Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/19/2009 1:16:00 PM It's Just a Number...would be a good title or Too Many One word answers? Light & Love Login to Reply

Jay Loveless Date: 5/15/2009 9:03:00 AM We Numbers Written By Chalk, Washed Away By The Rain. <33 Me PS I love this its amazing ^^ Login to Reply

Charlene Bird Date: 5/14/2009 8:55:00 PM This is a very interesting write, and I am sure we all felt like the outcast at some point in our lives, and once you love yourself so will everyone else. Love the creative structure to this Lexi, good one you! Login to Reply

Chamonique Knowles Date: 5/14/2009 7:24:00 PM i like the structure of the poem and the message. no better person to be than yourself. Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 5/14/2009 1:44:00 PM just be your self. time will come when months will feel like weeks. and years will pass like months. the older you get the faster time moves. enjoy your youth you have a very short time left. then after that the work begins. john Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 5/14/2009 10:29:00 AM Levi,..this is a touching write,..I'm sure you will come up with a creative title, the way you write! ty for your comment.......james Login to Reply

Reality . Date: 5/14/2009 9:42:00 AM i can relate to this poem a lot.! very motivating. -Reality Login to Reply