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Below is the poem entitled INTO NIGHTSCAPE which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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High above, storm grows bizarre A maddened sea , rattling the mast; My fate near water’s edge, aghast A life shuffling as night is cast All dim except one single star. Through smog, a fair siren appears Long the tresses, eyes made of green, Rising to meet tempest’s bloodstream In her lash, a shipwreck redeemed; Calming my fright among hazed tears. Ahead I lay on shoreline’s eaves The buoyant glide of milder waves, Softens with maiden’s hushed octaves That even rough typhoon behaves; As she coasts along, then leaves. I wake to feel a heady scent Lips tasting salt of restful night, Upon dreamscape, snapshots delight Till misty air grabs fancy’s flight; Yet, her mystique leaves me incensed. Pocketful of Dreams Contest: Poetess Darkly Envelope Quintet FormRhyme Scheme: a.b.b.b.a

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 6:50:00 PM
    beautiful and captivating with imagery with superb, concise poetic talent, as usual. Saw this on the Top 100 Recent list. :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 6:42:00 AM
    Nette, Kudos for your win--you had me from the start as I forgot it was a dream! What images here all the way through!

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 9:48:00 AM
    Hi, my very dear friend Nette! I'm now in Bangkok. I'm so sorry, I just came now to say Hi to you and to congratulate you on your super win 'coz I went to the church to attend multiple & big events (almost whole day). MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR SUPER WIN (& other wins) AND YOUR OUTSTANDING WRITE with Big hugs from me! I'll come back tomorrow afternoon! Take care & God bless! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 7:48:00 PM
    Oh fair siren your star appears to have won over the sky, congrats my dear on your exceptional win xxx

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Nette an intriguing dream.Congratulations on your well deserved dream. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 3:17:00 AM
    'A maddened sea, 'hazed tears' and 'milder waves' - oh my...

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:28:00 AM
    Congratulations nette. 'Till misty air grabs fancy’s flight' .....such a beautiful line that seems the essence of dreams. SuZ

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 12:50:00 AM
    Nette i so enjoyed this,you are so talented ...Seren

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 10:16:00 AM
    So beautifully penned dream poem by you nette!!Enjoyed very much.

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 9:15:00 AM
    A really beautiful poem! It's a clear winner! :)

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 6:44:00 AM
    Reads like a winner to me...Enjoyed reading this morn..I believe that this is the best one that you have written in long while..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 5:48:00 AM
    The mystery and reality of emotions after a deep dream ..... This is really a good poem Nette - You will be the winner of this contest - I believe that for sure. - Wishing you a lovely Sunday! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 5:19:00 AM
    Sounds like a winner to me Nette.Too many great lines to pick just one !!Anne