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Inside the Outer Side

Making and doing (poetry) pursuing, with the re-membering of feel and shape concerned, yet not by all..! all are not intaking of the coming awareness, with life in rude health and how it forms! a quest of proportion & perception now unnoticed and unsung and LOVE..? is it LOVE.? with the (unlovley) or the plain function or..? even the unfunctioning of humanity not to sing or portray its truth where..? is there not beauty? if not in all.! all of life as it is manifest, & with no malady to intrusive! for the negating of mankinds intrinsic judgmental leaning, both inner and outer to an eventuall despair, (is ever the better love of all & in all affairs.)

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Date: 5/20/2012 9:01:00 PM
Bold by true statements here, Joe! Poetry, the unravelling of the senses, other times an emotional journey. Here your sage and muse are at loggerheads? Elizabeth pinned it down though, it all seems to come together with the last line. Oh, best wishes to you and yours! Love, Mikki
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Date: 4/20/2012 8:32:00 AM
A wonderful title Joe for a poem deep in thought. I love the message especially he last line!
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:55:00 AM
HI, JOe, here is one that I had somehow never read before. It is an interesting one. SEems paradoxical (is that a word?) HOpe the beginning of your week was great. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:50:00 PM
a great piece of work Joe, enjoyed it.
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Date: 12/15/2010 12:07:00 PM
We do have an "intrinsic judgmental leaning," Joe, but there is beauty in life that overrides all of the negativity. I really like the message in this poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/13/2010 7:58:00 AM
Well written, enjoyed taking this journey with you!
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Date: 12/13/2010 3:46:00 AM
Interesting thoughts penned in this one.Your presence at my work made my morning brighter..Thanks for stopping..Sara
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:22:00 AM
Nice presentation Joe with this poem ..question marks make it interesting to read over and over again.. the lines of intense expression.. speaks volumes .. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 12/11/2010 3:14:00 PM
Nice introspective thoughts yiou have penned, Joe
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Date: 12/11/2010 2:35:00 PM
Nice thoughts expressed in this fine poetry from your heart...well done Joe..
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