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Innocence Duo-Rhyme

A new born babe so innocent, lays in mother’s arms quite content flailing small limbs in full display, young lungs fill with air, loudly bay. Soft eyes lacking doubt or dismay fragile heart, no burdens to weigh or thoughts too sinful to betray. Hand cradles tiny head from sway, safe on mother’s chest she will stay until she is grown, moves away. Born into a world reticent; knowing for sure she’s heaven sent. Copyright © 2012 By Caryl S. Muzzey Tenth Place Winner ~ "Duo-Rhyme Lovely Invention of the Late Mary Ports” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Aug. 9, 2012

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Date: 8/10/2012 1:49:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:49:00 AM
A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:59:00 PM
Perfect. congratulations. Lee
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:33:00 PM
Lovely words of true innocence, Caryl! Congrats on your winning work! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/4/2012 2:29:00 AM
Caryl congrats on your win, a great poem to all mother's..David
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Date: 8/4/2012 1:21:00 AM
Caryl, This lovely entry reminds me of my dear g.daughter who just turned 5 mos. yesterday. A wonderful Duo-rhyme and deserving of your win. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/3/2012 7:12:00 PM
Hi, Caryl. This was quite precious and a good way to make use of the duo-rhyme poetry form. Big congratulations to you in my contest and thanks for your support.
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:32:00 PM
Great descriptive work..Enjoyed reading the lines about a new little one..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2012 12:30:00 AM
Babys are surely heaven sent...sweet poem...enjoyed & good luck.
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Date: 7/24/2012 2:36:00 PM
Lovely write! Babes are so innocent! Good luck. :) Tanya
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