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In the Shade - Contest

There is a place deep inside Where pain and suffering reside Visions live happily within Seeking a life without pain and sin Musical sounds help salve his pain Till the magical day he is well again Unfortunately he has to rest in bed To help cure the sickness in his head Until that day his tolerance fades Sunny smiles are left in the shade. Poems name is : Enferma en la Cabeza Contest name : Reinvent, Revamp Reimagine Penned October 15th 2013

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/20/2013 11:55:00 PM

This is a very beautiful poem!

The Situation

Date: 10/19/2013 8:09:00 PM

Nice to have someone who cares waiting for you to get well. The poem is you.

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/20/2013 1:03:00 AM

Hi the original poem was written by another souper,i just re-wrote it as per the contest......Seren

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/18/2013 7:33:00 PM

This moves one to think how difficult the road to recovery can be, be it physical, or of the mind. Either way.....it takes care, patience and true compassion....... what a wonderful and caring poem this is. Good luck in the contest, Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/19/2013 11:28:00 AM

Thank you Carrie ....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/16/2013 7:02:00 AM

This is a tremendous write my friend! I just had to write a comment on this poem, it is such a wonderful poem Seren! You have impressed me with your talents with this amazing piece, I really enjoyed reading this spectacular poem! Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/19/2013 11:29:00 AM

Thank you Russell ....Seren