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Impressions of love

Engulfed in a zephyr racing with eagerness
Our two halves make a whole core
Moving my fingers across the soft pallet of you
I’ll paint your sculpted hands forever in my mind
A splash of cherry red lips flushed with love
The sounds of intense drumming stroking in our hearts
An eternity is rapidly moving from eye to eye
Loves aroma encircling and flickering in our heads
Just a moment in time that lasted in the always
Strong and secure and soft venerable
Bound by your arms and held close to your soul 
Altered in a state of emotional seduction
Two bodies rejoice in the sharing of love 

Copyright © Laura Mckenzie

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  1. Date: 3/26/2010 6:04:00 AM
    Well that last line did it for me to make it a fav.. such an inspirational luv poem and I also have a poem Expressions of Love ..amazing... I guess great minds DO think alike..haha..luv it Laura and thankxxx for your always special comments..luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 11:34:00 PM
    This is the type of love that should last forever, Laura. Such an inspiring poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 9:19:00 PM
    Great job here, Laura. I like this line: "The sounds of intense drumming stroking in our hearts"... Very nice. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 9:15:00 PM
    beautiful and elegant.thanks for sharing your smile.

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 8:57:00 PM
    Definitely sounds like love and merging on several levels. Nice read. Thanks for comment on my poem, maybe I did fall in love for the moment, mainly just felt a joyous feeling listening to the Buddhist nuns chanting and feeling the warm golden light.