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If my spirit was a color, it would be psychedelic, as beautiful as a rainbow ~ If my spirit were a taste, it would be just like honey dew. If my spirit were a feeling, it would be as lovely as a spring day. If my spirit were a smell, it would be as sweet as a magnolia in bloom. If my spirit were a sound, it would be as harmonious as a sweet symphony If you would receive of my joy, I'd share it with all of you ~

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Date: 1/19/2009 1:25:00 PM
I really like this one. The use of multiple sense imagery is definitely a real strength in this poem. Love the last line. It gives the reader a personal touch. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/28/2008 12:47:00 PM
such a nice piece with a short title. some times all it takes is one word and you used it well. john
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Date: 12/27/2008 5:09:00 AM
How lovely. Who would not want to be in the midst of such beauty? I would accept in an instant! Love, Shar
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