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Ice-Flower-Eyes

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Below is the poem entitled Ice-Flower-Eyes which was written by poet Ingrid Laymann. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Ice-Flower-Eyes

under thinning treetops
rime is setting up to grow

each one walks his single trail

I’d like to breathe a window
into your ice-flower-eyes
detecting sparks of color
in the stock of your seasons

you deny my coming close

the frost might keep us tied
ossified right at the touch

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  1. Date: 5/3/2009 5:57:00 PM
    Ingrid, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 6:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/29/2008 10:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Warmest wishes for a safe and happy new year! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 12/29/2008 9:15:00 AM
    Ingrid - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – I hope the coming year has many blessings in store for you and those you love – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 12/28/2008 6:31:00 PM
    Well done Ingrid! Congratulations on this poem being featured this week! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 12/28/2008 4:55:00 PM
    Congratulations Ingrid on the featuring of "Ice-Flower-Eyes." Vince

  1. Date: 12/28/2008 4:40:00 PM
    Interesting use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen