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I remember the times we use to share I remember the times you were near I remember the 'I Love U's' I remember how you made feel warm and feeling new Now it seems as if you don't really care Now your never really here Now there's no more 'I Love U's' Now you just make me feel blue I remember the walks we use to take I remember the calls we use to make I remember the 'I Miss U's' I remember the smiles and giggles too Now you just walk away Now your calls faded away Now instead of the 'I Miss U's and Now instead of the smiles and giggles All we do is fight and argue I remember the looks you gave me I remember the teddy's you won me I remember the places we went I remember the small things we did Now you just look angry Now there's no more teddy's Now all we do is sit Now all the small thing faded I remember we use to talk for hours Now we don't any longer I remember you use to make me laugh Now all I do is cry I remember I use to love you Now I'm not even sure I like you... *I wrote this for this girl I knew about a year ago. I seen the pain in her eyes and the problems her and her dude Was going through...

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Date: 12/16/2008 4:41:00 PM
ready for delivery only one problem acceptance. mine was stoped by a police order to stay away. better that than to have her read it and through it away another form of nonacceptance....you wrote this for a girl???
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Date: 12/16/2008 11:24:00 AM
really good use of anaphora. this hits you at the heart. really good
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Date: 12/16/2008 10:39:00 AM
I am REALLY and TRUELY sorry to hear about your friend. . Love Your Friend Alexz ^_^ P.S. SWEET POEM!!!! I can really feel the emotions in it. .
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Date: 12/16/2008 10:30:00 AM
Ok, Read my story I just posted about a TRUE person. . . And please tell everyone else that you know or on PoetrySoup about it. . . . Thank You, Love Your Friend Alexz ^_^
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