I Miss - 4

Looking at the green mountains across the valley below
Smelling the fragrants of the forest after winter's first snow 
Hearing the ringing of Church bells and the echos of hymn
Feeling the Birch bark, so paperly thin
Vine ripen tomatos that I myself grow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 4/27/2013 10:12:00 AM
Although we are in different parts of the country, I can relate to much of these images from growing up near mountains and planting a garden with tomatoes. Love it
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Date: 11/30/2012 12:07:00 PM
Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest HG. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:05:00 PM
Daniel, congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD
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Date: 11/23/2012 3:38:00 AM
Congratulation Harry my friend a wonderful image you have given us xx
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Date: 11/18/2012 1:23:00 PM
hi harry what a lovely rhyme my friend xx
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Date: 11/18/2012 11:58:00 AM
Your Liege if you leave off the last line this would be a very good verse for my 4 lines contest!! I'd love to show it off for you! Yours In Service
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Date: 11/18/2012 11:57:00 AM
You are staying at a nice place .... well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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