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I Guess That's It...

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I Guess That's It...

...or just thoughts

I just want to create
I guess that’s it, just create
Money does not move me
Fame? Why do people want fame?
Glory? I build in obscurity.
Legacy? How can the dead enjoy?
I just want to create
Just to see it grow
To see it go from nothing to something
Not because of sunlight
Not because of nature
Because of me
Is that wrong?
I guess it is a little vain
I know all things are vanity
But, these are my thoughts
Wrong thoughts, maybe
They are MY imperfect thoughts
I just want to create
Cause and effect
Action and reaction
Thought and fruition
It seems simple
Too simple, to some
They want more
Some verbose explanation
Some critical reason
It is not that complex
I just want to create
I guess that’s it, just create

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  1. Date: 11/1/2009 3:40:00 AM
    Such a transcendent piece that flowed mellifluously.You are a poetic genius. Sincerely,Eric

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 1:56:00 PM
    Mark. i read this and it rolled of my tougue like it was my own. my words my heart my own soul speaking the words. excelent! great work. there's something sentimental to us poets contained in these words you'v expressed it well. John Henry Loving III

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 9:12:00 AM
    Great writing here, Mark!! Its been said that we are "made in the image of our creator" and so ... smile ... creators we all are destined to be ... wether its a "muse" or the "Spirit of the Universe" its working for you ... congratulations on this wonderful write being featured this week here at the Soup !!

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 8:35:00 AM
    Congrats on this selection. I completely agree, however a little fame and money wouldn't be too hard to swallow. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 5:16:00 AM
    Many, many congratulations on your poetry being featured on this October week >> James

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 4:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Mark. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2009 6:37:00 PM
    Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen