I Cry.

If you don't know
You will see me 
And mellow.
Your smiles i smile,
Your pains i pain,
Therefore you see me so right,
So bright like a light.
That exactly it potents,
It also forecast a mission so challenged,
By strong forces unknown,
Constraining my every positive movement,
Seen and unseen.
If you don't know
You will think i smile,
I cry inside of me,
Waiting for a joyful deliverance.

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Yet another poem for addicts, every day,
remorseful addicts cry. help one by your side to smile,
please try....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/15/2013 3:19:00 PM
charles you have a little poem called "A Caring One". it would be great in my FAVES contest which is happening right now. If you see this in time, you should enter that one.
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Date: 8/5/2011 12:37:00 PM
Powerful write Charles!! Brilliant as always!!!!!
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:43:00 PM
impressed how one can reacout to others,,, sure enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/17/2010 5:42:00 AM
its always nice to make people smile,even more beautiful when yourself is crying. .beautiful message.
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Date: 11/12/2010 3:47:00 PM
a sorrowful look at oneself..a great write...thanks for your comments on my work!
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Date: 11/11/2010 11:11:00 AM
Charles, Sad but well written message. We all have our demons I guess. As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/11/2010 8:16:00 AM
So true my friend... positive write to help others....Michael
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