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I am...

I am a poet writing of my pain
I am a person living a life of shame
I am your daughter, hiding my depression
I am your sister, striving to make a great impression
I am your friend acting like I'm fine
I am a dreamer, wishing this life, wasn't mine
I am a girl who struggles with suicide
I am a teenager, pushing her tears aside

Side note: (Writing for other ladies out there, not so much myself, so don't worry about me)

Copyright © Heather Hill

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  1. Date: 6/4/2010 12:41:00 PM
    Very nice lil ma! You have a flow like mine...maye you can come down of that high horse and hit me up:) I only deal with 110% real individuals, anyway..SM me k? JA

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 11:01:00 AM
    Such a heartfelt write Heather. Enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/7/2010 8:30:00 PM
    Hope you got my email..hope all is, and hugs, Jimmy

  1. Date: 5/6/2010 12:27:00 PM
    This is deep and something that everyone will go through at some point in time, the extremes of emotion are a curse to the heart, but would the heart exist if it were not for emotion? Thanks for writing something raw :) much love and respect. Lance

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 4:42:00 AM
    You named all this which is important to say, Heather! Well written! And thank you for your comments and have a nice day!...Gert

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 7:49:00 PM
    This was a very strong poem! I think most of us can find something in these lines we have faced at some point in life. I love the title, it says so much in the poem. Wonderful work.

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 9:53:00 AM
    niice write!..first person is always more alluring dont change anything especially if its your style of writing!..whenever you've created concern within a reader thats a good thing!..well done!

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 8:54:00 PM
    I was only writing a poem, in the idea it is for others out there going through it, it is not for me!! I will change it to make everyone happy...just a poem to express an idea of girls out there going through these things...

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 8:34:00 PM
    suicide. .im not so sure. why the suicide? what is the reason so life ending?. . must be a reason. . it's better to express your depression, holding it back is only hurting you, as you can see. it makes it the more depressing.. -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 6:51:00 PM
    Well written on the feeling of one..U had me there till the suicide part..for sure not me, good one any ways,,p.d.