I, the Blade Bearing Lunatic

My delightful darling, my senses magnified with your spirit nearby
And I feel your misty entrails and silky casing chilling my pours entirely shut
Your presence surrounds me much like the heavy air I breathe 
Your anger and confusion I share and my delusion is apparent 
I clinch my fist together tightly and strike the hardwood floor below
I scream your name for the blood you spilt, not by yourself 
But by a man, a madman, insane, a blood thirsty animal
A psycho lope across an easy path to his dwelling of sickness
There are no factions of justice, no suspicions, not yet
For how long, I ask? Until the sickness is far too visible to flout
Pain will resurface through the eyes of the blade bearer
I pummel the oak yet again as my heart absorbs the agony
Self-inflicted though, I am the blade bearing lunatic who slayed my queen
My love, I beg of you to haunt me past consciousness so I may die
An agonizing death that I need to cure me from insanity
You watch me and I feel your eyes like stones striking my cold torso
The torture I deserve isn’t sturdy on the mind of me, a lunatic,
The blade bearing lunatic who slayed his one and only love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/20/2012 9:19:00 AM
Wow powerfull hopefully fantasy even though not a good place to dwell. A skilled write! Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2012 12:07:00 PM
Thank you for the encouraging words
Date: 7/29/2012 9:48:00 PM
Ken, i'm a little late congratulating all my sisters past contest. I'm enjoying all the DARK EERIE POETRY TALES. entries..*Looks like it was a fun CONTEST* Thank you for the entertainment :-) very eeeerie of you... take care~PD
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Date: 7/27/2012 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "Dark Eerie" contest Ken. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2012 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning write Ken good one xx
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Date: 7/25/2012 10:25:00 AM
Ken, super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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