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Hurried - Acrostic

Hit return or hit the gas; either way will do. Unrelenting is the mantra that I've subscribed to. Racing every moment, even during sandman’s quest. Really, I’m not kidding; day and night I feel so pressed! Idleness deceives me behind his simple mask Exactly what was my goal when starting out this task? Deliver me to a real life; that is all I have to ask.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/11/2013 8:56:00 PM
a lovely write, sir and a nice message to the lord
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Date: 10/9/2013 7:48:00 AM
Just delightful welcome to soup, I especially enjoyed how the subject matter was SHOWN in the verse and this was not a simple telling. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:13:00 PM
awesome word to write on David.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/8/2013 2:42:00 PM
David, congrats on your placement in the acrostic challenge contest! Nicely done...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/8/2013 11:20:00 AM
Hi David, , congratulations on your Acrostics challenge...love Linda
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Date: 10/5/2013 12:18:00 AM
I just had to give a win to this one since it reminded me so much of myself. I am always so busy!!! Congrats. I really liked this one in my contest.
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