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Hurried - Acrostic

Hit return or hit the gas; either way will do.
Unrelenting is the mantra that I've subscribed to.

Racing every moment, even during sandman’s quest.

Really, I’m not kidding; day and night I feel so pressed!

Idleness deceives me behind his simple mask

Exactly what was my goal when starting out this task?

Deliver me to a real life; that is all I have to ask.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:56:00 PM
    a lovely write, sir and a nice message to the lord

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 7:48:00 AM
    Just delightful welcome to soup, I especially enjoyed how the subject matter was SHOWN in the verse and this was not a simple telling. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 8:13:00 PM
    awesome word to write on David.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 2:42:00 PM
    David, congrats on your placement in the acrostic challenge contest! Nicely done...Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 11:20:00 AM
    Hi David, , congratulations on your Acrostics Linda

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 1:30:00 PM
    Love it David, reminds me old poem-There may be nothing wrong with you The way you live, the work you do, But I can very plainly see Exactly what is wrong with me. It isn´t that I´m indolent Or dodging duty by intent; I work as hard as anyone, And yet I get so little done. The morning goes, the noon is here, Before I know, the night is near, And all around me, I regret Are things I haven´t finished yet. If I could just get organized! I often times have realized Not all that matters is the man; The man must also have a plan. With you, there may be nothing wrong, But here´s my trouble right along; I do the things that don't amount To very much, of no account, That really seem important though And let a lot of matters go. I nibble this, I nibble that But never finish what I´m at. I work as hard as anyone, And yet, I get so little done, I´d do so much you´d be surprised, If I could just get organized.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 12:18:00 AM
    I just had to give a win to this one since it reminded me so much of myself. I am always so busy!!! Congrats. I really liked this one in my contest.