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Hurricane Haiyan -

Roaring, lightening blue sky, blue ocean
Swishing, wasting men, houses, land.

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  1. Date: 12/4/2013 9:24:00 AM
    i feel the intensity... good piece

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 5:38:00 PM
    You've captured an awful moment well, in these few words.

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 7:44:00 PM
    Described devestation well with few words..pray all is well with you Dr...

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 3:20:00 PM
    Magnetic and forceful....I like the way the last line leaves the emotions until the last 4 words

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Good write. . .I often stood in the eye of the hurricane, feeling its power around me, waiting for it to strike. Filled with a beautifully dangerous anticipation.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:59:00 PM
    yeah that was in your neiborhood.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:42:00 PM
    Very impactful, Dr. Mehta.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 4:11:00 PM
    good one!! Is this the one that was in the Philippines recently? I don'T watch much news so I don't remember what name they gave it.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Well written my friend -but how do you describe hell on earth - you did wel lBrian

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Wow a storming cracking good huricane poem! Remarkable style. Thanx dr. Mehta

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 10:15:00 AM
    Let us not forget them......continue helping in any way we can. Thank you for this reminder, Dr. Ram. The more words we speak of it.......perhaps the more hearts will be stirred to help!

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 9:27:00 AM
    A reminder of the passing of a terrible storm that has destroyed lives in its wake..Great work about the topic..Sara

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 8:53:00 AM
    Interesting form of poetry that packs qiute an impact. Your words summon images, sounds and feelings of the disaster very poignantly in just these few chosen words.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:05:00 AM
    the power of a hurrican is tremendous Richard a fine pen Shadow x smile hug