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HUGS-2

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HUGS-2

HUGS

The day after the Tsunami hugged the shores,
by a penitent ocean lying low,
in the beach  which lay mauled and scarred,
an old woman and a girl stood homeless and hugging 
and not far away
a  bower lay  crumpled, within which
but stood tall as always  the two-some  
of a neem and a banyan in an unshakeable hug.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 01 Jun 13
For SKAT’s contest

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  1. Date: 6/14/2013 6:04:00 PM
    I bet you'd want to hug everything including a tree after that! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:11:00 AM
    This is really amazing write my dear friend Jag! Belated big congrats on your awesome win! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 3:16:00 PM
    jag!... another gem from you.. creative way of treating the theme.. sweet congrats!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 5:12:00 AM
    clever concept here jaggy, and I see congrats are due bc it won (I've never seen a banyan tree) x :)

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 10:34:00 PM
    Great hug poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 8:28:00 PM
    Jag.. Congratulations :-) on your very sweet hugging poem. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 7:52:00 PM
    Excellent, congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 1:20:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS! thank you for trying out my contest. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 10:05:00 AM
    - A comforting hug, well done jag. - Luck in contest. - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 6:25:00 AM
    love this. love story behind! thanks for commenting to my poem. good luck to the contest----Elai