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Hopefully i can keep this up...

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Hopefully i can keep this up...

Let go of these beliefs,
That I used to cling to,
Move on to the changes,
That are coming at full speed,
These new thoughts are all mine,
Formed by my own brain,
No more parental influence,
Making my thoughts and theirs the same,
I've certainly had some inspiration,
To consider new possibilities,
Rather than what I was doing,
And simply not believing anything,
I'm embracing this new mindset,
Not holding anything back, 
From now on I'm giving all I've got,
Done leaving all this slack.

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  1. Date: 6/25/2009 5:39:00 PM
    Great story of hope.... placed into the form of poetry. Enjoyed and have a great night.