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Honeymoon Serenade

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Honeymoon Serenade

Just as the moon rises each night and even as snow is caressed by its light, then glowing, I'll rise, becoming your dawn, your curved sleeping form to smile upon. With eyes like bright stars, I then will embrace the landscape of you, each small line on your face. And surely you’ll mirror my worshiping glow, for I am your moon and you are my snow. I’ll keep shining down with each breath you take. May I blaze in your dreams before you awake. And barely I’ll whisper, “Keep sleeping, my dear.” Your faithful beloved, I’ll always be here. Reposted here on 2/6/2012

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  1. Date: 8/23/2014 2:48:00 AM
    I love the simplicity of these beautiful words, the message is clear and easy to see....The rhythm and rhyme are perfect! This is such a lovely poem, Andrea. It so deserves a first place! Congratulations to you!.... Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem. :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2014 12:56:00 PM
    Just beautiful. I really like this. God bless you and happy writing

  1. Date: 8/21/2014 9:53:00 PM
    Beautiful, just beautiful Andrea. Heartfelt congrats

  1. Date: 8/20/2014 8:13:00 PM
    This is absolutely beautiful, smooth like cream and such lovely images. Way to go, Andrea.

  1. Date: 8/20/2014 3:11:00 PM
    This is absolutely beautiful, Andrea! Lovely and romantic. Now, who would ever write me something like that!! Congratulations on placing first; very merited. // paul

  1. Date: 8/20/2014 9:52:00 AM
    WOW, Andrea, this is very sweet. I like the win... Linda

  1. Date: 8/20/2014 7:17:00 AM
    Congratulations for your win and placement Andrea! You rock! ^_^ <3

  1. Date: 8/20/2014 6:35:00 AM
    Wonderful write Andrea! U r at ur best here, congrats on first place win!

  1. Date: 8/20/2014 5:35:00 AM
    Very romantic write. congrats on the win,Andrea

  1. Date: 8/20/2014 3:46:00 AM
    I can't BELIEVE I missed this one! Absolutely beautiful my friend...Congrats - Tim

  1. Date: 8/19/2014 3:00:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/19/2014 2:40:00 PM
    Just lovely Andrea and congratulations. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 8/19/2014 1:10:00 PM
    Hey Everyone! When I said 'Off you go now' I didn't know you were totally going to blow my mind, not all of you at once! I am honored to have read your poetry. Thank You for entering my contest! Off You Go Now, Judy

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 9:29:00 AM
    Andrea great. Congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 4:51:00 PM
    Andrea nothing as peaceful as sleeping where you are loved....this is beautiful...congratulations...

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 4:45:00 PM
    Congratulations Petal, You know this contest only asked for good poems only, not great ones haha. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Andy loved it first time round too xx

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 11:18:00 PM
    This a super lovely stellar poem my dear friend Andrea. I'm so in-love & my heart was singing while reading this stellar write of yours. My huge hearty congratulations on your super win! My Biggest hugs! Thank you so much for sharing-to my fave. Thanks a million for your precious time stopping by. Sorry if my expression of gratitude comes only now. 'Got hectic schedule & the other day, after school I'd a bike accident ;)). Got bruises but I'm fine now;)) Thanks a lot again. love lots, Leonora

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  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:17:00 PM
    nice going Andrea, congrats....SKAT