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His Heart - My Gem

the line to his heart
intricate and delicate
a jewel I found...

lovesenryu

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/27/2019 6:59:00 AM

Nicely written!

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/1/2010 5:28:00 AM

Lovely Senryu Congrates on having your poem featured this week Wilma love Jayne

Skat A

Date: 9/29/2010 8:15:00 AM

WILMA , CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2010 8:15:00 AM

Hello! Wilma, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/28/2010 6:24:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on being featured this week. Vince

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/27/2010 7:54:00 AM

Congrats Wilma!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 6:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Wilma. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/26/2010 6:35:00 PM

Beautiful Senryu here, dear Wilma. Congratulation on being featured this coming week. Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/26/2010 3:06:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a nice one to share with us all today with luv...

James Fraser

Date: 9/25/2010 11:56:00 AM

A most deserved win with this Senyru gem Wilma >> James

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/24/2010 5:26:00 PM

so much said in 3 lines, Wilma-- wonderful senryu on the line challenge! & uh-oh you should be sleeping by now! me I never was able to sleep anymore-- you see what happens?? so go to sleep!! Congrats with this one :)-- hugs nikko ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2010 7:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in Paula Swanson's contest "Line". Love, Carol