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Hip Hip Hurray-Debbie's Birthday

Debbie's birthday Hip Hip Hurray, all ku no play National ku day! Hip Hip Hurray gift some haiku, National ku day I write,you too! Gift some haiku chocolate no more, I write you too one,two,three,four! Chocolate no more cake of haiku, one,two,three,four haiku in a queue! Cake of haiku mind your syllables, haiku in a queue how many candles? Mind your syllables not less not more, how many candles behind the back door:) Not less not more must be perfect, behind the back door dump all mistakes! Must be perfect all ku no play, dump all mistakes Debbie's birthday!! © kash poet ============000============= *Wish You a Very Very Happy Birthday Debi. Placement:1st; (September 2012) Contest: It's My Birthday Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi =============000=============

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  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:42:00 PM
    KASH, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:41:00 PM
    Oh, you are so smart... well done. Lee

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 5:47:00 AM
    how delightfully funny, kashi.. super congrats on your win!.. :) huggs

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:55:00 PM
    Many congrats Kash for this win.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:11:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Big congrats once again kash she deserves all of these lovely poems xx

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 12:31:00 PM
    Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Mr. Kash ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 2:36:00 PM
    This is so sweet. I know she will like it. Is it going to the contest? Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:56:00 PM
    Nice string Kash, they are really hard to write.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 8:56:00 AM
    Oh, I hope Debbie saw this one! How clever!!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:34:00 PM
    great write,,,, and bright blessings to Debbie,,, she explained to me how to write haiku ,,,, good luck on your win ;}

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 11:34:00 AM
    great write, especially as a pantoum. they aren't easy! good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 9:49:00 AM
    wow!!! best birthday poem for debbie :) Good luck!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:51:00 AM
    lol, love this witty write, Kash - I know Debbie will love it too : )

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 8:48:00 AM
    i got a greeat kick from this, kashi... debbie will surely enjoy your greeting!.. fabulous!!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 7:44:00 AM
    this is very very clever. I think she will LOVE it. I know I DO!!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 5:33:00 AM
    a wonderful poem Kash, and very deserving too!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 4:58:00 PM
    Oh my! Got to go wish her a Happy Birthday, nice haiku's Kash you never disappoint us with your haiku's they are the best, love and light vie

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 4:58:00 PM
    wow what a fabulous card for our birthday poet Kash .. a super treat of a write she will jump for joy .. good wishes for a big win but this one takes the cake luv ..