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Below is the poem entitled HIDING PLACE. which was written by poet k k iloduba jnr. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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in those raging flames of your eyes
that i find the calmness of dewdrops,

in those burning arms
that turn my craziness
into obsession,

in those sizzling whispers and gasps
that have plundered my heart,

in those chimes of your ankles
and the glimmer of your bangles
that do not let me sleep,

in the deep blue darkness
that i only get to see your face,

i want to hide
be hid in  a world so wide.

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  1. Date: 11/19/2009 5:58:00 AM
    Very passionate write. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 2:10:00 PM
    Burning again? : ) Lovely, passionate writing, KK. I love those hiding places. Excellent piece. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 1:21:00 PM
    Really can relate to this poem, the first line just had me captured, fantastic write, thankyou for your comments on my work, take care and love, Jo xx

  1. Date: 6/16/2009 3:36:00 PM
    sensual,passionate write-a place of refuge,a place of safety--there you hide...we all search our refuge,i can relate--beautiful my talented friend-----charma

  1. Date: 6/16/2009 8:31:00 AM
    true sexuality, very well done and touched those feelings that are so private.

  1. Date: 6/16/2009 5:41:00 AM
    Loved your hmmm comment on my Lusciuos Piece...I had just read someone elses verse on culinary treats LOL...if we can't go hmmmmm once in awhile our brain matter will freeze up! Your verse above has so much love in it! Lucky women there! Light & Love