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Swirl With Me

my love, stay gently wild

and foxtrot with me

to swirl in flaming dips

of night… heavenly!



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Giorgio V's Laconic Contest
by nette onclaud

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2013 11:15:00 AM

Way to go!!!Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 12/1/2013 3:17:00 AM

A very lovely and splendid poem! So love it. Biggest hearty congratulations my very dear friend Nette! It's an honor sharing with you this wonderful win! Cheers and hugs! love lots, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 9:35:00 PM

this is a gorgeous little poem, Nette. BIg congrats on your win.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/30/2013 6:18:00 PM

So romantic, Nette. Congrats!

Roger Horsch

Date: 11/30/2013 10:09:00 AM

What a wonderful poem, Congratulations on your win....Roger

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/30/2013 12:20:00 AM

Nette: ....a wonderful moment captured ....a real art piece. Congratulations, SuZ

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/29/2013 11:21:00 AM

So lovely in its lilt and flow. I think I'll put on some music and dance. Congrats on top honors.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/29/2013 4:51:00 AM

Congrats on the win, nette

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/23/2013 8:26:00 AM

very beautifully drawn

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/22/2013 1:38:00 PM

Interesting twist on the general perception from this one Nette, thank you for the inquiriy about myself..'

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/22/2013 11:37:00 AM

your visual poetry, sends the mind into overdrive

Carl Fraser

Date: 11/21/2013 6:33:00 PM

Beautiful Nette, Love is just a continual dance isnt it. Blessings Carl

Manny Paras

Date: 11/21/2013 3:41:00 PM

Delicately delicous ride with every twist and turn. This has hints of seduction yet classy in how it sways.

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/21/2013 1:02:00 PM

a dancer i see.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2013 6:28:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Great work..Very expressive and passionate..Thanks for stopping by..I am good..Sara

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/21/2013 3:03:00 AM

hellooo Nette.. how have u been? What a wonderful poem, always elegant and powerful.. such a great poet you are.. xoxo

Daniel Port

Date: 11/20/2013 2:24:00 PM

Tenderly romantic I go zzzzzzziing over this poem. You are the best epitome of passion, love, and romace in this place.You can breeze through the range of sensuality without blunt exposition.Which leaves me imagining the fire within. Elegant heat like no other!

Kennedy Muitherero

Date: 11/20/2013 1:12:00 PM

Short and sweet! The best I tell u!