Frothy Clouds

Along the winding skyline, a parade
Of bird-tails on flight with puffed caress
Like giant pearls woven by moonshine’s braids
A hammock of foams swerving on crowned dress
To pass unto hillsides so wholly blessed

And fluid my breath I marvel the view 
Reflecting peace, clouds transparent drift
Oh,wonder of shifting faces imbue
Such tranquil gait that cruises and uplifts
Lightening my woe as hushed froths pour mist.


Clouds Contest of Barbara Gorelick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/10/2014 4:27:00 PM
Nette, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA
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Date: 9/1/2013 3:54:00 PM
Again, congrats on your win. You have drawn a beautiful picture on clouds. It's simply I say " a nice creation". Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:21:00 AM
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:04:00 AM
Nette, congratulations with the winning poem...Linda
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Date: 8/30/2013 5:21:00 PM
No wonder you nailed the contest. Your imagery is gorgeous.
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Date: 8/29/2013 2:54:00 PM
Hey congratulations, I had not seen the winners list yet. Nor your poem. Great imagery. I remember a long time ago when someone had us use the hammock in the sky imagery. It works so well for clouds!
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:37:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:51:00 PM
blessed Sara Congrats to you on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/27/2013 9:04:00 AM
I can float away on this poem.....rest my head in the clouds and marvel at your words! Nicely done!
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Date: 8/27/2013 8:24:00 AM
This is one of my favorite entries, Congrats!
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Date: 8/27/2013 12:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your place on the winners list nette xx
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Date: 8/26/2013 8:30:00 PM
a good win. Nette... ~Love ~~SKAT
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Date: 8/26/2013 8:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win in my contest..thank you for supporting it..BG
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Date: 8/25/2013 11:36:00 AM
Nette, should I now call you Nette Oncloud? They are indeed wonderful things. Just tiny water droplets that form so many unusual shapes. One of my favorite pictures is of the lenticular cloud that forms on Mount Fuji. By the way, thank you for your kind comment.
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Date: 8/22/2013 12:09:00 AM
so much serenity sprinkled here sweet Nette..How arre you ?
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Date: 8/21/2013 10:42:00 PM
Excellent. Well imagery write. Nice poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 8/21/2013 10:29:00 AM
- Beautiful thoughts in a lovely poem! - Luck in contest !!! - Enjoy your holiday, Nette!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2013 8:38:00 AM
It almost seems like you're speaking from the perspective of an incomplete angel looking down from above, searching for the final pieces to her wing. Wonderful job!
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Date: 8/21/2013 8:23:00 AM
Flying high as usual, Nette! Beautiful images.......To pass unto hillside so wholly blessed! :) Loved that line! Caught part of the show! Glad to have heard your voice. I have a dear friend living here with me who is from Manila...Maboohi!
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Date: 8/21/2013 7:25:00 AM
Wow!!! Your poetic mastery is surely shown within this masterful write my friend! I am definitely in awe of this exceptional poem here Nette! You have delighted me by the expressive nature of this phenomenal piece! What a grand poem, such a fantastic verse, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/21/2013 7:11:00 AM
Very descriptive with great poetic quality..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit to my work...I am wondering about hammock of foams swerving on that crowned dressed though??Sara
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