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Halloween--In Reverse

On Halloween it was understood We could not leave the neighborhood. Just to be sure I minded Mother I'd had to take my little brother. We both were having lots of fun Treats were abundant, tricks were none. I had thought it would be extremely neat To try the next block on the street, A house lit only with blue lights Would surely yield sugary delights. From the specter answering my knock, I was almost put into a shock. When I heard a most blood curdling yell Forgetting my treats I had run pell-mell. At my front door was my own mother Demanding where I'd left my brother. Worse than the fright I'd left behind, My fate because I didn't mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/7/2013 10:06:00 AM
Very clever and with some memorable events thinking back to my own childhood at Halloween having to watch out for the younger siblings :) Congrats to being featured on Poem of the Week
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Date: 8/26/2013 9:20:00 AM
Joyce, I enjoyed this terrific write of yours. Hugs
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Date: 8/23/2013 8:39:00 PM
hey, it worked out and you were doing a story form. VERY cleverly done!!!
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Date: 8/23/2013 5:28:00 AM
YES! The first Halloween write of the season, you might have started the kick off for the Halloween fun Joyce! Thank you for writing this enlightening poem here! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/22/2013 9:06:00 PM
I love this write!! It took me back to my own memories of my siblings on All Hallows Eve... :)
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