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Half-Here Look at me, my laughter and smile my curled hair, my dressed up style facade that you rarely see through, only the close and very few try hard to fill the cracks with light, But beneath it is gloomy night My love, my everything, my bliss My heart - Stole my happiness Our troubles, I thought not much In the end, you cooled to my touch Remember the good times, you said Mind blinking, I was aching to mend I was ready to go forward, but not you Holding back, not ready, I knew I wanted to give you me and more. But your distance brought, only tore Why did you keep me so long? I was so deep in your song. Didn't want this - wasn't me - why?! It was you, that made my heart cry. If ever you want your first whats real And we both know how we feel Even when you run, run far away. I'll be the one - i'll stay Til then, I was wrong, I thought forever No more happy times, no laughter Behind the mask, I'll hide the broken And real love, again, will never be spoken

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/22/2012 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured write this week Jen. Love,Carol
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Date: 2/17/2012 12:20:00 AM
you know jen this is a very great poem..I love the flow.and rhyme.. love will overcome at the end.. life gets deeper, after a broken heart... enjoyed reading your poetry...pd
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Jen Reagh
Date: 2/19/2012 4:52:00 PM
Thank you so much! I was worried about it being to sophmorish, but eh, guess its ok. : ) thanks for commenting!
Date: 2/15/2012 12:02:00 AM
Brilliant written, enjoyed it alot! so true that a real love, again, will never be spoken, normally kept for our self, when we should show it in the open! oxoxo love Laila
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Jen Reagh
Date: 2/19/2012 4:54:00 PM
Thanks Laila! Really appreciate your comment! I like it, but still unsure of its quality - always mice to read positive things about your writing! : )
Date: 2/14/2012 9:24:00 PM
Another good write with great descriptiveness and rhyming. I welcome you and I hope I see more fine work like this in the near future.
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