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Haiku 48-54 Strolling along Palm beach

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Haiku 48-54 Strolling along Palm beach

palm trees silhouette
against ocean's pastel hues
sunset's soft glow


misty horizon
oceans seperate his palm
from my tear
 


my floating sandal-
tumbling waves break
upon the shore



floating bubbles
before i tossed my pebble
dad breaks wind at sea




waves lilt upon the sand
coloured corals crunch
between our toes



low tide
dawn's golden shimmer reveals
a  coral reef




the tempest
a lone ship fades
in the mist




not for the contest but tnks Heather 
Ober and participating friends for 
the ocean haiku inspiration

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  1. Date: 2/16/2014 11:29:00 PM
    I really enjoyed this journey. I feel like I just returned from vacation! Well done!! You know this is going into my favs!!Asavvy1

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 9:19:00 AM
    I have a sudden urge to book a vacation. I just love the ocean.

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 12:44:00 PM
    Thank you offering me this walk....while reading! LOVE this set of Haiku.

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 9:32:00 AM
    In this one post you have shown more haikus than I have written in more than a year..... and all of them are quality creations.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Soup mail.

    Simmonds Avatar Keith Simmonds
    Date: 6/17/2013 4:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    These are beautiful beach haiku, Charmaine! I love the visual impact created here! Watch your spelling, though!
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 9:48:00 PM
    You always paint beautiful scenes with your poetry! I enjoyed this very much sister much love from me to you <3- Edward

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 1:34:00 PM
    Right now I am enjoying the second, and the last two haiku the most. Maybe this is simply because of the mood that I am presently in? Again, you came-up with a series of very well-written haiku, Charma(oh, the last one has a syllable count of: 3/4/3 = 10 syllables. Impressive!).

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Fabulous haiku as always. Your last one there is chillingly good. I like them all though; couldn't pick a favourite. ~I got the subtle little hint in your last comment. I'm working on it. Thanks a million for your committed devotion to my humble work. See you around like a donut!

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 6:42:00 AM
    Hi Charma!

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Sweer short tales of the seashore here! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 9:32:00 AM
    Well you seem to have been crazy inspired by the Oceanku contest (whether or not you actually participated in it). These were fantastic! The five-year-old in me is drawn towards the fourth one... about your dad "breaking wind"... LOL! Though the last one is definitely the most traditional... keeping to the short and concise side of haiku. It's a good skill to have... thanks for sharing these little gems!

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 11:43:00 PM
    wow, Charma, and are you asking us our favorites when you say or or or? I can tell you the best one for me is the second. It creates a unique visual. I like all the rest very much and found the breaking wind one to be hilarious.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Charma, spectacular as always!...I got a laugh out of number 4. :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 6:01:00 AM
    - They are all well written Charma .... but if I got to pick one - I choose: number one! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 12:54:00 AM
    Excellent, Charmaine! You're so "gooood" writing haiku!! The second and third one are awe-awesome!! A fav!

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 9:54:00 AM
    'coloured corals crunch', such vivid alliterations! Very evocative of being with the ocean, really good. Have a lovely rest of the weekend, Charmaine. ~Jeremy

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 3:11:00 AM
    Excellent. Good haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 2:18:00 AM
    Very good set of haiku here Charma.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 7:48:00 PM
    Oh wow..........these are so wonderful....and unique. I love the idea of the floating sandal....who would be so clever? What great haikus!

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:59:00 AM
    Give me a good beach & crashing waves any day. This was heart-warming, to say the least.

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