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haiku 3 - the flower

~ death came in the dawn fringes of sweet petals die fading like a dream ~ ___________________ December 5, 2012 haiku

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 10:54:00 AM
    Beautiful words said in this Haiku. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:37:00 AM
    exquisite write here, my friend

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:50:00 PM
    i just love these short ones you do. This is gorgeous.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:42:00 AM
    Excellent haiku, Constance. Enjoyed. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 6:34:00 PM
    tender as the roses u so love and such emotion too Constance .. a stunning moment of thought luv ..

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 3:38:00 PM
    Fading from a dream to a new reality. Eclipsing the greatest imaginations. Death holds such limited power!

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 2:23:00 PM
    Really like your haiku. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:32:00 AM
    in nature we see birth and death, this wonderful Haiku depicts all of that perfectly, you are a wonder Constance

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:11:00 AM
    Flowers have only days to live. There a birth, a beauty, and decay. They tell us where we've and where we're going. It Gods mysterious way of telling us gently.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:52:00 PM
    Very descriptive work through the use of Haiku..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:52:00 PM
    Nice to speak to you today and hoping you are feeling well. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:47:00 PM
    This is another one of your beautiful writes my friend! I'm glad to hear it's just you enjoying to write sad poems and not being sad yourself! Thank you for letting me know this! Now I can just admire this awesome artistic side of you and the tremendous talent you have! This poem is an exact example of this wondrous talent, what an outstanding poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:33:00 PM
    Touching haiku, Constance. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)