Haik-Hoot

Wise owl at his post "hoo, ha, hoo...hoo, hoo, hoo, hooooo" thus he gives a hoot!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 4:08:00 AM

JSLAMBERT, stopping by to say good night~PD

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/3/2012 12:34:00 PM

This sure made me chuckle, Joey :D -- what a cute write --you sure do word-play well :D and for some reason (I am weird, your second line made me think of a woman in labor) Hmmm, could very well be in writing haiku, one can give birth to beauty ;) -- and thank you (arigato!!), maraming salamat on your meaningful comments to mine, I am honored with what you said and I feel too that this shouldn't be about popularity-- if we evoke something in our readers, that is an awesome reward :D

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/29/2012 12:10:00 PM

What wonderful poetry you all are sharing today. I enjoyed reading your JSL. Hope the coming week finds you in good health and your life full of joy and inspiration. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/29/2012 11:06:00 AM

What a hoot this poem is! Ha ha! What a wonderful write this is! I'm glad to see you back on the Soup again, we all missed you! On my Random Thoughts poem I thought it hilarious that you brought up DEEP THOUGHTS! I didn't even think of that, very funny! Well, I'm sure to see you again, Awesome Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2012 10:10:00 AM

COOL HOOT, Joey. ME LIKES this a lot. Lucky you, going to the beach. sounds like great fun.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2012 5:45:00 AM

"hoo,ha,hoo...hoo,hoo.hoo,hooooo" - oxox love Anne-Lise

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/29/2012 12:12:00 AM

This looks good for a haiku.