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Green Spanish Eyes - Part 1

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Green Spanish Eyes - Part 1

Ah Consuela! Invoking vast vistas for visions of green Spanish eyes, I discern them again where she left me back then, as we kissed when she parted, my friend. So I’m daring to tread towards the klieg lights ahead, where I’ll wait till I see her ascend. Ah Consuela! I’m watching, she teases the mirror with green Spanish eyes; Her serape entangles her ebony bangles like lace on the sorcerer’s looms, And her capes of the night, she drapes tight to excite, and her fan is embellished with plumes. Ah Consuela! I’m watching as spectators savour her green Spanish eyes; Taming wild concertinas, the dark ballerina performs on the concert hall stage, But she shies from the sound of ovation unbound like a timorous bird in a cage. Ah Consuela! I’m watching, she quickens the pit with her green Spanish eyes, As the cymbals shake, clashing, the floodlights wake, flashing, igniting the wild fireflies, And the piccolo piper’s inviting the vipers to coil in the cold caldron skies. Ah Consuela! I’m watching the shimmering shadows in green Spanish eyes As I rise from my chair and converge to the stair with a hesitant sip of my wine. Though she doesn’t deny me, she wanders right by me with neither a look nor a sign. Ah Consuela! I’m watching, she waves to the stage with her green Spanish eyes, (For her senses scoff, scorning the biblical warning of kisses of Judas that sting, With her pierced ears defeating the echoes repeating) and smiles at the bluebird that sings. Ah Consuela! I’m watching faint embers a’ stir in her green Spanish eyes, For a soft spoken stranger enveloping danger has captured the rhyme in the room As he slips into sight through the scent of the night and the breath of her heavy perfume. Ah Consuela! I’m watching, she gauges his guise through her green Spanish eyes - From his gypsy-like mane, to his diamond stud cane, to the raven engraved on his vest - For a faraway form, a tempestuous storm, lurks and heaves neath the cleav’e of her breasts. Ah Consuela! I’m watching the caravels cruising her green Spanish eyes; With the castanets clacking upon the deck cracking, he whips ’round his cloak with a whiz And without sacrificing, at mien so enticing, she floats with her face facing his.
Continued in part 2

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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 12:41:00 AM
    Great work done. My friend very creative. Good luck and best wishes.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:23:00 AM
    Captiviting work that drew me in and held my attention...Enjoyed reading about those Green Spanish Eyes..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 4:54:00 AM
    Ah Consuela. A lady I know said her heart was in tatters after reading this. Mine isn't, but I have to admit to understanding her point of view. Great write. -Red.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:37:00 PM
    A shining tribute to Consuela!! have you heard the song, blue spanish eyes? now we have GREEN ones here! So romantic.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:18:00 PM
    great rhyming but i think of it as more a sonnet for it's length.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 5:29:00 PM
    very interesting great poetry here, i can see why it goes on in symetry, and the ache in the heart, to be so apart, makes for a path oh so splintery...

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 12:10:00 PM
    You are a champion with romantic verse, Terry. Authentic imagery that is building up this wonderous piece, I can't wait to read the following writes. I'd thought of using "castnets clacking" before, but it was in one of my Calamity poems and the sound had been made by the clam.:(( your writes are more gripping and substantial....I'm off to read the following verses. Keep well......Mikki:)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:15:00 AM
    Nice poem about a "senorita" I look foward to reading the next two! Clever rhymes here as well! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:11:00 AM
    i'll see you in 2 and 3, this is so good Terry.....

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 5:21:00 PM
    I don't think I've ever seen green Spanish eyes...??? But your words make me want to see them. Ha,ha...Very nice.

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 8:10:00 AM
    mama mi, Consuela. mama mi, Terry. How do you do this? I'm onto 2 and 3.