Gluggamous-Fluggamous, Spitimy-Bitimy

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Gluggamy-fluggamy

Grandfather Thaddeus

went to the grocery store

bought him a lime

Home with tequilla and

salt coated shot glass he

unceremonious

lost track of time.

Spitimous-bitimous

Grandma Penelope

done with her work early

home she did race.

One glance at Grandfather

mega-monstrosity

Grandma retreated to

Clyde's warm embrace

Gluggamous-fluggamous Grandfather Thaddeus went to the grocery store bought him a lime Home with tequila and salt coated shot glass he unceremonious lost track of time. Spitimy-bitimy Grandma Penelope done with her work early home she did race. One glance at Grandfather mega-monstrosity Grandma retreated to Clyde's warm embrace ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ inspired by John Wulf's McWhirtle

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Russell Sivey

Date: 8/27/2011 10:33:00 PM

I live with my grandparents, who are quite elderly, and they too want alcohol and warm embraces themselves as well! I enjoyed this awesome write tonight!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/27/2011 5:52:00 PM

ha ha ..good for Grandma Penelope... this is super cuute cool and clever Nancy..good comeback to John's McShirtle..which I read a few days ago..entertaining and amusing..luv.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2011 3:08:00 PM

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Tim B

Date: 8/27/2011 12:39:00 PM

Came to check out this wild title. That spitimous-bitimous will get a man in trouble every time he has the gluggamy-fluggamy, no doubt. Nice wordplay here and an interesting, kind of humorous take on a real problem for old gramps :)