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Glorious Red, Stunning Blue

Nothingness- pure, vibrant, black-and-white. Oh- the brightest you say? Oh- elegant you believe? Have you ever, wished upon a star? Constellations, the true color, of canvas, that is the sky! A dark sea, black-and-white twinkle, light and bright. Black- White- Oh! Orion's belt.... A little to the left. A little to the right. True color, in black-and-white.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/16/2012 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Second Chance" contest Luis. Sorry for the belated congratulations but so much going on at this time. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2012 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Luis. Enjoyed this write, prompted me to look up the Orion's Belt:) Thanks for sharing this astronmy delight! Mikki
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Luis Martinez-Rivera
Date: 8/15/2012 11:13:00 PM
There is always a purpose to writing glad to see someone found one of them. :D one truly misses the beauty of the World when they don't stop to observe it.
Date: 8/13/2012 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations Luis xx
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:53:00 AM
Luis congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:44:00 AM
HI LUIS,.congratulations with your awesome second chance poem. Thank you for the support..luv~PD
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