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I trace one summer nightfall when the mist Wheels oh so gently down the woods Embracing all the fields, the shooting grass In yellow, green contrasts. When all around the meadow lamps are cast A tiara of lights, so warm Kids resting on the cushion, dreams on flight After kite fest’s delight. And high above, across a thousand stars The breeze clears air through puffing clouds While blissful heart sips flavors of this day To mildly glide away. Contest: Francine Roberts' Summer Day 10/8/10/6 rhyme scheme by nette onclaud 9 june 2013

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  1. Date: 7/31/2013 4:15:00 PM
    High above the stars!!!

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:56:00 PM
    NETTE, you wrote a lovely summer day's poem.... congrats... SKAT

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Hi, my dearest friend Nette! This is a perfect and excellent poem as always deserving its greatest win! I'm so proud of you! Your poem gives me some special memories in our homeland during this season. My biggest hearty congratulations on your great win! Thanks for stopping by & your support as well. Take care always! I'll come back to read more of your poetry soon. God bless! love lots & biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Nette I so enjoyed this verse. Summer is my favorite season. Congratulations on your superb win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 6:00:00 PM
    a nice summer day write... congrats... :-)... always & forever.... PD

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 4:33:00 PM
    Lovely Nette..congrats on a grand win. BG

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Oh, So exquisite, Nette! Truly delightful poem and I'd like to read it again and again, so to my favs. it goes.. Congratulations on a deserving win!

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 11:47:00 AM
    A great congrats on your superb win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 11:25:00 PM
    nette, congrats on your first place win with this lovely entry

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Transported to a sweet scene! Thanks Nette! Jimbo

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 7:08:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery in this poem Nette!Lovely read.

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 1:27:00 PM
    Very colorful nightfall that you have described in this one..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for your visit to my work..Your review is always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 3:05:00 PM
    You lift us with the kite and wishing we are there--lifted too.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:47:00 PM
    I lnow omly few people who can wrote as magical as you..Your muse seems to surround your inner being all the time-Just beautiful.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 4:13:00 PM
    a gorgeous one!!! wow, Nette.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Nature is so much a part of you. I always feel a peacefulness in your work.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:43:00 PM
    This is another tremendous write by your my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem! There is one thing that I noticed with this piece, you had a syllable count of 10/8/8/6, instead of 10/8/10/6 like you wanted to have in the second stanza! I just though you'd like to know Nette! But just the way it is is totally fantastic, I imagine whatever changes you make will make it wondrously great! What a charming piece, Excellent Work!!

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    Date: 6/10/2013 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sweet thanks, russell... the word tiara is considered as 3 syllables... :) huggs!
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 11:41:00 AM
    Dear Nette: what a wonderful summer night you share with us:) You pulled me right into the stunning scenery."A tiara of light you are,Nette..":-) Hugs and Love..Arild

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 11:10:00 AM
    Heya Nette, how you? Lovely write you have here. Really enjoyed reading you again. Hope your weekend has been a great one and enjoy the week ahead. *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 10:54:00 AM
    - Very clever and sweet written, Nette! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)