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Fragmented Dream


     The forest was lush green and dripping of moss and rain,
Glittering glass streams meandered past dark foliage and trees;
          And wild flowers dropped their petals into the water,
Where they drifted down waterfalls into sapphire blue lakes.

     I listened deeply to the rippling water kissing the wet rocks,
And the forest was loudly chirping and breathing and beckoning me;
          Then I heard my name being called from a faraway place,
It undulated in the tangled branches and whispered on the wind.

     The voice called my name over and over and I ran towards it,
My sobbing a loud moaning wail lost in the vast forest and streams;
           And it was dark night, the blue sky had withered away,
The stars trembled as I ran through the maze, weeping and searching.

November 4, 2013


Written for Your Latest Poem Contest, A Poet Destroyer

Honourable Mention

Featured poem February 23, 2014

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  1. Date: 2/21/2014 11:22:00 PM
    Constance, this is written well... To remember the fragments of a dream is a premonition scheme to perplex the mind into thinking... Good work... Verlena

  1. Date: 2/21/2014 10:15:00 PM
    Dear Constance, this gorgeous one is being featured at Soup this week. Congrats. I just love this.

  1. Date: 2/17/2014 10:57:00 AM
    Connie this I love so poignantly written kudos congrats on being featured hugs

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 3:12:00 AM
    Broken, , Congratulations & thank you for supporting my contest... always ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 3:46:00 PM
    wonderful write here, Constance

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 2:46:00 PM
    This is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, you have surely put me into your dream with you while I read this poem, Great Work!!