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Forget me-knots


He loves me`
He loves me without'

Sometime has passed, 
I'm still without.
A wish~
I forgot to make that night.
Heaven and earth, I cast behind my eyes. 
A beautiful sail, that in time will collide.

A tower, I can't reach.
Without the proxy deepness in your beating, 
life will hold no breach.
Without the intense shine in your eyes.
I'm an exile, In my own home.
I can't find the sweetness it holds.
I run from myself.
In hopes that my future never unfolds.
A cure, I live without.
I bathe under my oak tree.
This bacteria I can't live without.
I'm breathing and lost with out glee.
Injured on this orchid ground.
I crawl without a kissing sound.

I face the golden sun, as the rain pours on me.
Without the feeling of my skin.
I have no reason to be~
Fungus grows in my domain.
I have nothing, YET~ I HAVE IT ALL!
The friction grows and burns blisters all over my wall.
The swelling compels a surface only I feel.
Without the look and voice of your laughter.
I walk a long* long walk. 

A life without, your breath. 
Is no life at all...
Outcropped, from the outside. 
Lacking the perfect boundary.
This world shops for an appearance without surface.

My smile hangs without the beauty found in the word happiness.
In a world full of "be"gotten knots.


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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 2:30:00 AM
    you leave me wanting for more... talk of sweetness... talk of lore. -in my eyes, we are all interconnected, in some way, shape, or form. I wish you time to read and comment, if you like, my "Threads of Life", and "Warrior Princess Divine"--I would like to read your thoughts on each. Ty, Wendy~

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 5:45:00 PM
    Sad love poem, it is terrible to be forgotten but I love the flower and poem, nice work.

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 12:32:00 PM
    wow. i really liked it. i could see the whole thing in my head and it rang in my heart too!

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 12:09:00 PM
    What a great poem Linda. You really know how to reach the hearts and souls . Thanks for sharing. Lucy

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:25:00 AM
    Excellent poetry.. stopping by to say HI...and say you are my FAVORITE POET..... xoxo Michael

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:14:00 AM
    A classic from you p.d, awesome rendition of profoundness which would inspire the greatest poets of all.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:14:00 AM
    A classic from you p.d, awesome rendition of profoundness which would inspire the greatest poets of all.

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 10:01:00 PM
    I have nothing yet I have it all...DEEP!!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:25:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 7:25:00 PM
    You are a brilliant...master your writing...and your friendship......

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 11:30:00 PM
    Another superb writes my friend, where emotions and desires have touched new heights from your creative pen. Sometimes with hopes and sometimes with tears in eyes. 'Injured on this orchid ground, I crawl without a kissing sound." The entire Poem is just beautiful and a new Gem in your treasure. Love and best wishes always…Ravindra…Poet D

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 10:45:00 PM
    I believe you, Irma. I imagine your house with miles of smiles. Just look at that little baby picture of ya (or is that someone else?) thanks for reading my smiles poem. I am not very happy with it!

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 9:35:00 PM
    I'm confused. Wats missing?

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 8:43:00 PM
    HI, Irma, finally getting started on comments for the night. I am waiting for your NEXT poem. come on, you can do one!!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 8:10:00 PM
    I love the part that says, "I run from myself in hopes my future never unfolds." This is so beautiful and powerful. You not only create strong images in my head as I read this but especially strong emotions! Great work.

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 3:04:00 PM
    The emptiness is ours to cherish. But without love we're bound to perish. The grayness that emits it's charm. Won't neccesarily cause us harm. It's hard to know which rose to pluck. Or if it's love or if it's luck. But time will tell you when to call. For with each breath your heart will fall.

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 9:23:00 AM
    What's wrong, dear P.D. What is all if you can't taste it? A perfect dark writing from you, dear. i hope it's not coming from your black mood. :)

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 11:25:00 PM
    This is a beautiful, descriptive verse. You have captured your emotions with such powerful imagery. There's beauty in all human emotions. We all feel this way at times. Your poem resonates with me. Truly incredible.

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 9:14:00 PM
    Striking quite a few chords with this delivery! Fungus is among us...Exile! NICE!

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 6:54:00 PM
    i love this piece. it is a declaration of your state of feeling and it is so powerfully written. incredible poem.