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Footprints In the Stars

walking on stars of time, each of our feet descend into a sparkling ether between the interlude and the finale in an absurdity of existence, each step will fall away marking its journey showering the universe in the star-dusted footprints all these passing poets from a neon time, will find, a softer grace in time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/25/2010 4:45:00 AM
So many stars and so many footprints, Jayne. We make such a slight impression during our lives and when our time has passed, these footprints are all that remain. Especially enjoyed the second verse where you mention the "absurdity of existence" and how each step falls away. Very thought-provoking, intuitive poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2010 1:11:00 PM
enjoyed reading today! glad to hear from you! Have not seen any new works from you lately!
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Date: 9/24/2010 5:07:00 AM
This is really something else. I enjoyed your whole outlook- Smiles
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