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Focus and Become

Focus your effort in the wrong place enter yourself in the wrong kind of race so shall there be a consequence to face Continue to make a big deal of things whining as if you were among kings watch all the heartbreak and sorrow it brings Can you not take your head from the cloud why do you appear to be so proud you think all the people around you have bowed I hope your arrogance will someday fade your intolerance will somehow become decayed the soul to flourish no longer delayed Contest: Here comes the Judge

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Date: 2/8/2011 6:54:00 AM
Great rhyming and a wonderful poem. I have sent you a soup mail(ps your soupmails did go through)~~
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:40:00 AM
You are really a gifted writer Keep it up, Virginia
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Date: 2/5/2011 2:17:00 AM
Words of wisdom that could apply to some folks I know, Virginia. Truly a great entry for the contest. I think Joe will love this one as much as I do. You seem to have a lot of insight into human behavior. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:20:00 PM
You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this presentation. This is a great entry for the contest.
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:46:00 PM
Well done Virginia~ and thanks for your brilliant comments.. I am really still a sweet little reballll.. and full of arrogance..lol.. and i love this poem.. i don't know about that head in the cloud.. but, i d set myself from everyone.. only because i'm i'm judged with out even taking action.. enjoyed and good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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