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Flaws Vs Flawless

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Flaws Vs Flawless

Flawless

She is by all means perfection, pretty and precise.
She has no need for correction, sugar and spice.

She has hands so delicate to touch, soft and tender.
I love them so very much, my all I render to her.

I wish to linger in her innocent mind, safe and secure.
Bad thoughts won’t reach me inside, innocent and pure.



Flaws

He is by no means perfection, foolish and flawed.
He has much need for correction, the touch of a god.

He has hands so coarse and clumsy, hard and irate.
He should hold her close, but he holds her like a mate.

He has stopped her getting inside his head, sharp and cold.
She’s too innocent to mix with the dread, tired and old.




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  1. Date: 2/23/2011 5:18:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your placement John, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 3:58:00 PM
    An interesting poem to read, and a big congratulations on your win. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 4:56:00 AM
    Many congratulations John on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 10:31:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) John~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 7:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry and your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 4:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win...Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 4:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in these couplet entries.

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 11:27:00 AM
    Hi John - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 10:59:00 AM
    Congrats on a well deserved win, John. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 10:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, john

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 8:24:00 AM
    Congrats on your well deserved win, John. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 6:41:00 AM
    Congrats John on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write and entry luv.. enjoy your top ten victory ..

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 6:35:00 AM
    What a great poem. Congratulations on your winning position in the contest. Most deserved. Best wishes. Deb

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 12:01:00 AM
    JOHN~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 5:28:00 AM
    This was very well written. It is amazing most often the contrast between men and women in relationships. Very nicely done.