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Feed Upon My Soul

*Note this is not sexual. succubus feed on emotion not all of them use sex as a method.this one uses touch to suck out emotions  *

As I lay on the soft moss your body beside mine. your cool hands on my breast your mouth hovering over my heart you feed upon the black and crimson mist that rises from my heart Full of hatred ,agony ,pain , sorrow and lust the lust for blood that consumes me this mist this congealed darkness that has conquered my heart upon which you feed so lustfully releasing me from its burden its dark chains; you feed on emotions taking my burden for your sustenance
my feelings, for you wil never leave me thank you for all you've done. you can feed upon my soul any time there will always be some thing for you at least the darkness insde me is has brought one good thing to me: you

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 1:55:00 PM
    Another fine (dark) work... I think you are very talented... Terry

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Wow this is great work, thanks for your review of my poem too, we do have similar take on the images of pain and suffering. Great work and enjoyed the visions your poem conjured up.

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 10:28:00 AM
    Wolf still very romantic..David

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    Date: 5/9/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    its not supossed to be romantic its dark and about pain & suffering & how cratures that cuase it can make also takit from you