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Family, unfinished

It never lasts nearly as long as 
it should
When it crashes down like a 
house of cards 
And there's a million hammers 
hitting your skull 
And it's all you can do not to 
Like you're the only one left on 
As if you were the only one 
graced with a brain
That even though your mind is 
faster, you don't count. 

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  1. Date: 6/18/2012 3:22:00 AM
    ''Family is a heaven in a heartless world ''.i like the concept of this poem .thank you for sharing .jk