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Falling on Honeyed Grass

Imagine yourself falling gently on grass,
wherein soft earth embraces you warmly.
Each drop of dew then tells you its story,
of how it broke free from its cage of glass.
You drink each bead, intrigued by what it has,
that makes you want more, that makes you thirsty.
A myriad of flavors, that changes daily,
 it never grows stale, no due dates to pass.

From bright kaleidoscopic waterfalls,
some honeyed mist found its way to this well,
which I’ve wished upon with this coin I threw…
And this is why I do not mind at all,
that I have stumbled, then tripped and then fell…
on earth that is you, that’s drunken me with dew.


--Italian Sonnet, Debbie sweetie ;)-- heehee, I tried >.<

** quick note: to everybody who’s passed by my poems lately,
 thank you very much ^_^—
Sorry, I can’t comment back right now, my connection is horrible (yet again!)
 and I am swamped o_O
and logged in here real quick to enter this 
in Debbie and Cyndi’s sonnet contest :D…
but hopefully I can drop by and say hello to you soon ^_^. 
Thank you again, especially to those who left comments
and asked how I was (I'm doing good, thank you ^_^)…
hope you guys are doing great as well,
and enjoy your week/end :D

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  1. Date: 5/20/2012 2:14:00 PM
    Good to read this earth sweet sonnet you have penned Nikko

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 8:47:00 PM
    Belated congrats to you if I never said so before, Nikko and thanks for my win in your earth contest. Can't wait till your connection gets better and we can have our lovely email chats again. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 11:20:00 PM
    Another one of your jewels going to my FAVs! Excellent write, dear Nikko! You write beautifully! Have a nice connection! : )... and a nice day! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 11:20:00 PM
    Oops! Belated congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 11:27:00 AM
    Dear Nikko, This is really lovely and uplifting. It inspires me to want to stop my busy day and write again. I too have been having computer problems and my computer keeps freezing and I have to manually turn it off. Wish I knew more about computers. I spent my birthday doing reiki at the hospital on patients and then my daughter and husband brought their baby over to my delight. Caring for her while my daughter works is the joy of my life. Thank you for the greetings. It was so sweet and thoughtful of Andie to mention my in her blog. Love, Lotus

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 5:17:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your win in the "Sonneteers" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 4:58:00 AM
    Hey,..are u being "crabby" again...I love the idea of a purple nurple crab! You will have to write a silly ditty about this cutie patootie avatar of yours. I wanted to drop by and say howdy...I will be getting my garden out this week and not on here as much...please tell your dear mum hello for me..let me know how things are going with her. Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 12:53:00 PM
    Hi Nikko! Glad to hear from you today,that means you`re having www.connection a great May 1st over there! Hugs flying your way..,(cool avatar by the way..NO,don`t pinch my butt with those huge claws,hehe:-)

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 9:21:00 PM
    Hi Nikko, love the way you use nature to tell a story with a deeper meaning. I think I hear what you have said. Luv. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 8:31:00 PM
    HI on this one again. Was it in the sonnet contest? It may not have perfect meter, but gosh darn, it's very creative!! thanks for your two comments. I was just looking at my cell phone and it occurred to me. oh my gosh, I could have used this for the froggy/lily pad contest, but I already had my fable up. Do you think I was better off to enter the fable, Nikko? hope to see you soon in emails. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 3:38:00 AM
    same here, nikks... bad tech problems for a months now.. DSL ka ba?.. it's my IE, i think!.. but i gotta give you brownies for this beauty, senti.. lovely!.. congrats with hugggs

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 1:48:00 AM
    Hello my dear Nikko I had pretty bad experience of internet connections when I went home. It is doubly frustrating to get connected in the barrios. May your wishes come true in every coin you threw! Good luck in your entry. All my love Dalila

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 9:48:00 PM
    Hullo Pikkochu, how goes you? Wot's up with your new avatar? Are you "shell-shocked", or maybe a bit "crabby"?? Big props on this sonnet! I couldn't write a decent sonnet right now, if I tried.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 12:57:00 PM
    What a lovely poem on the beauty of nature, Nikko. I love the "kaleidoscopic waterfalls and the thought of lying softly on the grass in Earth's embrace. Beautiful! My fishing trip wasn't as good as last year's, but I do have plenty of fish. Wish I had your regular email address. Would like to stay in touch. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 4:40:00 AM
    This is just dreamy dear poet ! Oh yes, I really enjoyed this write ! Have a blessed new week Nikko ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 3:58:00 AM
    Hey Nikko! Thanks for dropping by,its always a pleasure to hear from ya`.I agree with G.Rix,www are giving you a hard time these days.Send my best to nette if you have contact with here.Hugs and Love Always,Arild

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:55:00 AM
    Your connection is acting stale?...How is it that the WWW is never faithful to you gals in the Philippines? I don't get it!...I like how you described the dew in this reminds me of the many attributes of manna...wonderful imagination with cages of glass and each dewdrop having its own story...u got some kind of imagination, NIKKO. Things are going well with the family...I slowed myself down on purpose...catching up on a decade of needed rest!....u got some amazing entries in your earth hour contest...I saw a fab one today! Hugs to u 2.

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:57:00 PM
    Superb write Nikko!!! I really enjoyed this gem,congratulations xoxoxo

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 9:57:00 PM
    Hi there Nikko! Loved what you were alluding to here, the metaphor that permeated this entire sonnet. Such a neat way to approach this contest. Now, I LOVED lines 4 and 5. The metaphors really spoke to us, I enjoyed reading this. Cheers and congrats, Cyndi

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 8:44:00 AM
    Congratulations Nikko!! I love this...Well Done my friend...big hugs,love~deb