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Evil Has Gone

I’ve stared evil in the face And feed into its lies I ignored all the signs Saying my goodbyes My life was almost lost Nearly gave it away for free Not knowing my path was cursed I leaped willingly I suffered a great while not understanding why until a man entered my life showing me what to live by Now I've been set straight no reason for remorse we are to have a baby what a beautiful new course by: Virginia Frayer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/11/2011 7:08:00 PM
Nice writing, but I don't believe it qualifies as an enclosed rhyming poem. The rhyming scheme should be abba, not abab as you have it above.
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Date: 2/10/2011 3:07:00 PM
New life makes all the difference..They add joy to life...Those fans' hum can be soothing especially when faced with noisy surroundings at night..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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