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then there came the fiery one, red headed rancid Reeta, she threw hot coals into his bed, an flew on him the cheater, they wrestled and they fought like dogs, but she was fierce with anger, the smoke n fire did billow, fog, burning flesh ere the manger, so they sprang into the icy sea, made love till they were soggled, Odin looking down, with a tiny frown, dubbed em hairy Gog n Magoggle Don

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Date: 9/7/2012 10:42:00 AM
An appreciative thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2012 7:50:00 AM
Fun poem. I especially like the reference to Gog and Magog
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Date: 9/1/2012 9:36:00 AM
Hello friend, Enjoyed the second part of your ballad~ I am back... :) take care and I love ya! Cindy P.S. Always love reading your poetry cause it has such nostalgia always, love the way you write!
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Date: 9/1/2012 5:09:00 AM
Enjoyed this, Don, a poem from the Gods
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Date: 9/1/2012 4:46:00 AM
Very nice imagery... Terry
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Date: 8/31/2012 9:34:00 PM
Very ingenious write my friend, I really enjoyed the creativity you used to write this incredible poem! I'm fascinated by your poetry Don, you sure can write some truly awesome stuff! May the god of love smile upon them, or shall he suffer forever with her thorn in his side? What a powerful delight you have written, fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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