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Erosion - 1 and 2

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Erosion - 1 and 2

Erosion - 1

With a scholar eye I am looking at-

Looking at Sharpened Dream,
Burning heart burning across
Feeling the sour, feeling the layer

Is being wet tongue, gradually uncovered
vibrating lips and stick while mixing at liquor

-	A chemical compound searching for eyes
-	Searching liberty from sin
-	Burning the recipe of purity

I am chewing all the glamour with tortured eyes
Breathing fragrance; 

breathing easily passing days and nights

being tortured, told her- 
As its an erosion ; it’s a feelings

Written by Javed Akter

Erosion – 2

Sharp Sunshine ; I become anxious
sharpened me while it touches 
the ground

Like homeless lives I search forever
Blue ; blue feelings always
Walking around

Always sliding doors are crawling 
Crawling ever now and then

Kindly me; myself kind while waking up
After long night sleepless; sleeveless 
From deadly bed

Changing everything; changing backbone slowly
Steadily this side and that
Every time looking at decay

-Decay altering the sides

my feelings ; herself towards

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  1. Date: 1/5/2010 8:57:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 3:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Javed. May you have may more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 11:55:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 7:30:00 PM
    Javed, kudos on this selected poem going through the finals! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 10:37:00 AM
    Javed, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 11:12:00 PM
    Congrates on your wonderful poems going through to the finals ... Love Jayne

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 12:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 5:10:00 PM
    Dear javed, Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 1:57:00 PM
    Javed, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 1:28:00 PM
    Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 9:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Javed.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol