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Enchantment

~lifts my heavy heart

turns my frown into a smile

swap my tears for cheers...

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/5/2010 8:36:00 AM

Yup have to agree with you, enchantment sure can do that then maybe you can also add converts my typing to sleeping-- lol I need that ok obviously I am not making any sense here anymore-- eep sorry -- nikko ;)

James Fraser

Date: 9/4/2010 11:55:00 AM

Wilma, your poetry just gets better and better. And this is another little gem to add to your portfolio >> James

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/4/2010 10:01:00 AM

I need some of this "enchantment" sometimes... An optimistic Senryu, dear Wilma. Thanks for your nice comment. I would love to hear more about where you live and the language you speak there :)

Susan Palli

Date: 9/4/2010 7:47:00 AM

so uplifting!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/4/2010 7:41:00 AM

Wilma, I have been reading a lot of Emily Dickinson lately, your inspiration in this poem is very much like her "self-inspired" verse! jimbo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2010 9:03:00 PM

Enjoye your poem,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/3/2010 3:00:00 PM

Wow Wilma, this goes to my Fav. list... excellent Senryu.... Love your expressions it makes the reader want to reach out and hug you! love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2010 2:27:00 PM

HOORAY ... Wilma this is a grand write my friend... enjoyed its title, upbeat motion, sensitive words, and great feeling... wow..powerhouse poetry.. luv it... luv..